 Super Battle!super Sonic Vs Hyper M.s. Vs..., this will probly be the last story w.... |
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Sonic: Hey Tails.
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| Super Battle!super Sonic Vs Hyper M.s. Vs..., this will probly be the last story w.... |
 Jan 3 2006, 08:04 PM
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 Formerly known as Kirby. Group: Members Post count denied Joined: 24-December 05 From: Anywhere but here. Member No.: 4085  |
SUPER BATTLE!!!!!!!SUPER SONIC VS HYPER METAL SONIC VS HYPER SHADOW.
this will probly be the last story with metal sonic in it. sonic:**runs down hill**  sonic:he's here. metal sonic:**slowly floats in air**this time your mine sonic.**shots a beam at sonic making the ground collapse** sonic:what th.................!**sonic then falls in hole  metal sonic:what!!!!!! super sonic:**punches metal sonic though the stomack** metal sonic:**half of his stomack breaks**damn you!! super sonic:you'll never trick me.**super sonic then gets in battle stance**  metal sonic:**tries to punch super sonic** super sonic:**grabs metal sonics hand and makes half of it dissapper** metal sonic:! super sonic:now its my turn!!**punches metal sonic in chest and breaks metal sonic's head and core off** metal sonic:go ahead sonic kill me i'll just take over tails body. super sonic:oh no tails!!!!**runs to tails house**  shadow:hmnp! to be countiued................ -------------------- |
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Jan 3 2006, 08:52 PM
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Formerly known as Kirby. Group: Members Post count denied Joined: 24-December 05 From: Anywhere but here. Member No.: 4085 |
part 2
dead end! sonic then turns back to his original form. sonic:tails!!! shadow:**gets in the path of sonic and attacks sonic**  sonic:aaaaaaa!!!!**is hurt badly by shadow**daggit i can't move. shadow:it's called being knocked out**punches sonic and then knocks sonic out** mean while at tails is house tails:**sleeping**  metal sonic:**opens tails door** metal sonic:tails its time for you to die!! tails:aaaaaaaaa!!!!!**backs away**  metal sonic:ill have to end this quickly**punches tails but misses** tails:**falls out window**aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!  sonic:**catches tails**tails stay there** sonic:your not metal sonic he died your shadow!!! shadow:so you've finialy figured it out. sonic:**punches shadow** shadow:aaaaa!!! metal sonic:  metal sonic:die!!!! to be countiued........................... |
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Jan 4 2006, 12:21 PM
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 SA.net Newbie!? Group: Members Post count denied Joined: 6-August 04 From: Over There, Europe Member No.: 217 |
That's not a fanfic. That's sock puppet theatre.
You know how they say a picture is worth a thousand words? Well, "they" lied. -------------------- Living up to other people's expectations is nice, but what really matters is that you live up to your own. And you know what, I think you're doing pretty darn well so far, don't you?
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| Guest_shadowzero_* |
Jan 4 2006, 10:07 PM
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yo that was realy good. continue please
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| Guest_Darkness_* |
Jan 4 2006, 10:17 PM
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The picture make it funny! Its good so far, keep going please.
Owen, it can still be concluded as a fanfic even though pictures are in it. -.- Its not a "sock puppet theatre" if it was a "sock puppet theatre" then there'd be pratically nothing but pictures. |
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Jan 5 2006, 02:09 PM
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SA.net Newbie!? Group: Members Post count denied Joined: 6-August 04 From: Over There, Europe Member No.: 217 |
I take it back. Sock puppet theatre is BETTER than this rubbish.
But given the success of the entertainment industry with shows that are complete tripe, I can acknowledge that there are those with opinions different than mine who like this sort of thing. So although I really would like to lock this one, I won't do it. -------------------- Living up to other people's expectations is nice, but what really matters is that you live up to your own. And you know what, I think you're doing pretty darn well so far, don't you?
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Jan 8 2006, 05:21 PM
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Formerly known as Kirby. Group: Members Post count denied Joined: 24-December 05 From: Anywhere but here. Member No.: 4085 |
PART 3
finial battle. sonic:**jumps up in air and punches metal sonic down to ground** metal sonic:**dodges attack and swings sonic back on ground** sonic:**hits ground hard**aaaaa!!daggit! shadow:**punches metal sonic**errrrrrr!!!! metal sonic:**blocks punch and absorbes shadow**hahaha!!this is the ultamint power!!now transform!!!!!  **sonic and tails look at each other** sonic and tails:uh oh! metal shadow:choas slash!!!!!! sonic and tails are hit badly and get knocked out. shadow inside metal sonic:let.........me.....GO!!!!!!!!!  half of metal sonic's body breaks metal sonic:aaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!**dies** hyper shadow:hmmmmmmmm..........i should get rid of them too......**shots a energy ball at sonic and tails** super sonic:  **punches shadow's energy ball back at him but with more force** hyper shadow:  I can't hold it much longer! hyper shadow lets go and energy ball hits him making him fall in a black hole. sonic:**carefully puts tails back in his bed** sonic then runs away. knuckles:**whistling and walking**well i guess something happened here**looks down black hole and sees shadow**  knuckles:WTF!!!!!!!**runs away** shadow then falls down and stays there. the end |
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Jan 8 2006, 06:37 PM
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 Xaiv da wolf - All credit goes to the Tanman! Group: Members Post count denied Joined: 22-April 05 From: Someplace Member No.: 2157 |
No, it isn't sock puppet theatre... Sock puppet theatre is better than this...
Don't use Script and I'd think about giving it a better review... |
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| Guest_shadowzero_* |
Jan 10 2006, 05:48 PM
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Awesome job!
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Jan 10 2006, 05:59 PM
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SA.net Newbie!? Group: Members Post count denied Joined: 6-August 04 From: Over There, Europe Member No.: 217 |
I can't take it anymore.
I'll drop the lock if any other mods protest, but I honestly think this stuff is beneath even this site's standard of fanfics. Heck, I'm not even convinced this counts as a fanfic by any standard I've grown accustomed to. -------------------- Living up to other people's expectations is nice, but what really matters is that you live up to your own. And you know what, I think you're doing pretty darn well so far, don't you?
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