Detective Conan/ Sonic Crossober, Oh yes, another fanfic by me. Options

[kyraedenrayne]

Ok, I made another fanfic made by me. If you had liked my SonAmy together forever... Well this is MUCH better IMO though. Ok, I will now start. Oh yeah remember I write fanfics in script form.

* Conan Edogawa was walking alone for school. He had been thinking of Rachel latly. He knew he couldn't keep lying to her. He hated to see her cry for her Jimmy.*
Conan: *Sigh* Rachel... Should I tell you who I really am? I know you would be harmed if you knew because of the Men in Black, but... I can't see you cry anymore.
*Conan reached school and his heart sad and upset. He longed to get his old body back, and finally tell Rachel how he felt, and really why he's been gone so long. Hopeing to find those Men in Black and get the poison that was supposed to kill him, and send it to Doc. Agasa for analasis.*
George: Hey Conan!
Conan: Huh?
George: I've been calling you for five minutes! Whats wrong?
Conan: Oh! I was just lost in thought!
*Mitch joins the conversation*
Mitch: Are you thinking about your pretty sister?
Conan: Who Rachel? Like I said, she's not my sister.
Mitch: Whatever... ¬_¬
*Conan was walking home when he saw someone pop up from behind him. IT COULDN'T BE! It was. The men in black were behind him! Conan froze with fright. But some sixteen year old girl came to the Men in black*
Girl: Hello!
Conan: Are you talking to me miss?
Girl: Sure am!
Conan: Hi!
Girl: Hold on a second Jimmy Kudo... I mean Conan!
Conan: Oh, ok....!
*Conan noticed the girl had called him Jimmy Kudo. He watched her as she approached the men in black.*
Girl: Excuse me..
Jin: Can I help you?
Girl: Yes, I'm in the FBI, you both are under arrest for using poison to kill Jimmy Kudo.
*Conan freaked out! I mean how did that girl know that he was Jimmy Kudo?!? He's never met her in his life. So Conan took out his wrist watch Stun-gun and shot that girl. She was knocked out cold. And that gave the men in black a chance to rub her out as well. For they don't know that the drug makes people go back into childhood. Conan ran while the men in black were poisoning the girl and soon after, the Men in Black ran too.*

I will continue later! Anyway, I'd like some comments! Thanks! Oh and I forgot to use the Japanese Names! Sorry!!

[Kevin]

Suggestion: When doing a fanfic, it's best not to do in script format. Do it in story format instead. This is make it look more like an actual story rather than a script for a movie.

[NotSoFluent]

Sonic...Conan...me like. :3

It's not a bad start. If you want, I could post a list of the Japanese names; I have a bit of a hard time remembering them all, too. ^^;

But, yeah the script can be changed to story to make it more readable.

[kyraedenrayne]

Sorry, been gone for a couple of days. Anyway I ALWAYS forget how to spell Mitch's name in Japanese... And I'll write in story form.

The girl woke up. She felt like throwing up. She held her stomach, and then noticed. "No! This can't happen!" She said with fear. She had now turned into a child too. She was mad at Conan for sending her to sleep with his stun gun. The girl started walking torwards the nearest hotel to find out where Rachel... And Conan lived.

When she arrived at the nearest hotel, and went to the counter. "May I help you little girl?" The Counter girl had asked. "Yes, I was wondering where Richard and Rachel Moore live. I'm well.... a relative of Rachel and Richard." The small girl replied. "Ah, yes. I remember having them here. Here is their address." The girl slept the rest of the night in an ally.

The next morning she used a super computer watch to change her clothes and look like an avarage first grader. She arrived at the Moore's place and knocked on the door. Rachel answered the door. "Hello?" She asked. Rachel looked down to find a brown haired three foot girl. "Yes... I'm looking for a Conan Edogawa." She replied. "Oh! Well Conan shall be around here somewhere." Rachel said while looking for Conan. Conan was walking around in his pajama's when he stopped. He saw the girl! He screamed and ran away into his room.

"Hmm. I wander what's up with Conan?" Rachel pondered. "Oh I bet it's nothing! May I see him please?" The girl asked Rachel so kindly. "Oh sure! CONAN! Come on down! Your friend's here!" Yelled Rachel. The girl thanked Rachel and too ran to Conan's room. "Don't worry Jimmy! I won't hurt you! I am NOT from the Men in Black organization! I SO promise! I... I'm acctually an alian... well in your world anyway. By the way my name is Rebecca. Rebecca Hegdehog." Rebecca explained.

I'll continue later...

[NotSoFluent]

Ah nice, nice, nice. You're on a roll here with this here fic'. It's pretty cute.

Believe it or not, I'm working on a Detective Conan/Sonic crossover fic myself, but it's for the show Sonic SatAM, so the nature is darker. I'll be using the Japanese names, so I might be posting that name-comparison list whenever I get the chance to type it all up on Word and post a topic on it. I can't because I'm up to my armpits in school work and projects(you're lucky you don't go to my school..<_>).

Heh; Mitch's Japanese name is the hardest to remember; I'll put a list of the Japanese and English names so readers don't get confused:

Jimmy Kudo ------------ Shin'ichi Kudo
Rachel Moore ----------- Ran Mouri
Richard Moore -----------Kogoro Mouri
Dr. Hershel Agasa ------ Dr. Hiroshi Agasa
Amy Yoshida ------------ Ayumi Yoshida
George Kojima ---------- Genta Kojima
Mitch Tsuburaya--------- Mitsuhiko Tsuburaya
Joseph McGuire --------- Juzo Megure

That's all of them I can remember. If I forgot anybody, you can just tell me. I don't mind the dub names at all; I spent about two-three weeks memorizing the Japanese names. XD;

[kyraedenrayne]

Well I think of some names...

Vivian Kudo
Booker Kudo... Umm. that's it... I think...

Anyway continuing...

"Yeah... Sure. Alien." Conan said sarcasticly. "Oh, you are REALLY pushing it aren't you Kudo?" She said. Rachel ran in. "Kudo?!? Did you say Kudo? Is he here? JIMMY COME OUT HERE NOW!" Rachel damanded. "Oh! I didn't say Kudo! Well... acctually I did. I have to tell you the truth Rachel" Rebecca started. "No! She can't tell you the truth Rachel!!!" Conan said with fear and suprise. "Don't worry Conan! I'll tell her everything! Well like I was saying..." Rebecca almost finished her little story when Conan then interupt. "Oh, come on! PLEASE! NO!" Conan begged. "What's up with you Conan?" Rachel asked. "Well I said Kudo cause I know him! I was talking to Conan about him! Because we both know him!" Rebecca explained. Conan sighed in relief.

Rachel left the room to go start dinner. "WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!?!" Conan yelled at Rebecca. "Nothing! Hey I covered for you didn't I? Can't I have a little fun? I mean after YOU were the one who made me fall asleep in front of the men in black!!!" Rebecca said angrilly(sp?). "Fine, you had your fun... But what do you mean by (Alien?)" Conan asked. "Well I'll show you!" Rebecca said. She used this watch to stop looking human and look like her former hedgehog self. She bent her ears as soon as Conan saw what she looked like and said, "Happy?" Conan stared at her in amazement. Then he thought how big in cash he'd be if he turned this alien in! "Don't even think about talking me to a place like that!" Rebecca said very strictly. "Huh? How's you know?" Conan asked. "I just do okay! Plus... I don't want IT to happen again." She said as she was biginning to cry. She turned back into a human, and ran off mad at Conan.

Conan, was feeling horrible of what he thought. He went to see her to ask whats wrong but... "You want to know whats wrong don't you?" She said with tears in her eyes. Conan suprised she was talking to him again simply said "Well, yeah!" Rebecca turned around wiped her tears and started telling Conan of her life. "Well... When I was five... my whole family died." She started. "I was minding my own buisiness on my home planet. Not a care in the world. But one night I came home late. I saw my house burned, and my family dead. Then as I was starting to cry, a man, a HORRID man running away laughing. He may not be very thin and all but his mind is evil. Some say he is well... nevermind. Anyway, I was scared that someone had killed my only family. I was now alone. no one to see thier smiling faces. No one to go to when I was in deep pain. Just me. But, after a year or so, I was sleeping, and I woke up to this other hedgehog. He looked at me with theese sweet eyes, he picked me up and took me to his house."

She paused for a moment to see Conan looking upset too. She continued. "When I woke up, I found myself in a bed, and someone looking at me. He asked me if I was okay. Of course I said yes, hiding my secret from him. I asked him his name ans he simply said "I'm Sonic the hedgehog." I thanked him for taking me into a home. He simply just got me breakfast as if it weren't a problem. I felt like he was my hero. Soon after I met all of his friends. They formed a group called the "Freedom Fighters". I soon joined as one of them, and wanting to get revenge to the person who killed my family." She stopped. "And well...." She began before, " You don't have to finish. It's okay. I was suprised you'd even want to tell me that." Conan said. "Well I'm you friend now aren't I?" She simly asked. "Yeah, I guess so. Look, I'm sorry for sending you to sleep with my watch when you were just trying to help me." Conan said sadly. "Oh, it's okay, I know we will find them again!" She said with happiness.

And I'll end there for a bit.

[NotSoFluent]

Gawd, I can't stop reading it; the story's really cute so far. @.@ It's very easy to picture in my head; well done for a crossover.

Well I think of some names...

Vivian Kudo
Booker Kudo

*salutes* I'm on it!!

Booker Kudo------Yusaku Kudo
Vivan Kudo-------- Yukiko Kudo

[kyraedenrayne]

Sorry, been gone for a couple of days. Please don't close this admins and mods.

Anyway continuing...

Rebecca woke up early to get ready for her first day of school on Earth. She showered, got dressed, ate breakfast, and brushed her teeth. When Conan woke up, he saw Rebecca playing video games. "What are you doing? School is starting in an hour! You need to get ready." Conan yelled. "No problem I am already done with everything! I can't wait to go to your school!" She said very exited. "Okay..." He said disturbed. Conan got ready and headed out the door with Rebecca. "So what do you do in your school of Earth?" She asked. "Just stuff... You'll find out." He replied. Then George came by with Amy, and Mitch. "Hey Conan!" Said George. Amy ignored all of what they were saying and looked at Rebecca. "So who's she?" Amy said with jelousy(sp?). "Oh, her name is Rebecca Hedge.... I mean Robertson! She's staying with me for a while because her parents abandoned her. She's starting school here!" Conan explained.

"Oh... How, nice..." She said staring at Rebecca. Amy thought that Rebecca was trying to steal Conan from her. "What nerve! She's trying to steal my poor Conan away from me!" She thought angrilly. "Uh, Amy? Are you okay?" Conan asked. "OH! Yes Conan!" She replied grabbing Conan's arm and blushing. "Anyway, I got to give my registrations to the office to put me in a classroom!" Rebecca said as she walked to the office.

What a suprise she got put in Conan's class. She got an open seat next to Conan as well. By lunch Conan asked George if Rebecca could join. Amy said she couldn't because it was her first day and they should get to know her more. But the boys just said yes amidiatly(sp?). They were drooling over the new girl. So Rebecca joined. "Hey! What about me? I'm supposed to be the cute one!" She said in anger. "Oh, you are! We just have a new member Amy, it's not like she's taking your place. Rebecca respects everyone! So don't worry!" Conan said. "You really think I'm cute Conan!?!" Amy asked as her face was as red as a rose. "Uh, sure!" Conan said.

[NotSoFluent]

Ooh, looks liek Ayumi/Amy's jealous. I'd like to see what happens next; oh hell. XD;

[kyraedenrayne]

Sorry I'm always gone for a few days doing things with friends. Anyway lets continue shall we?

It was resess, and the Junior Detective Leage(sp?) were inside their office waiting for a case. Amy playing with her hair, George pretending that he saved a pretty girl, and showing off. Mitch wathing the wall, Conan bouncing a soccer ball on his head, and Rebecca reading. Not like anyone in the group would care, but she was reading her latest manga of Detective Conan herself. The only one who noticed was Amy. She saw the cover. "OH! The nerve of her!" Amy said angrilly. The cover had Conan (Of course.) Amy stomped over to Rebecca and grabbed the book out of her hands.

"And just why do YOU have a book with Conan on it?" Amy asked. Everyone else looked to the commotion. Conan was suprised and scared to find a manga on him! "If you'd really like to know, I got it off the internet." Rebecca said rudly. She grabbed her book back and left the room. After school she rushed home to talk to her friends on Mobius. She missed all her friends Sonic, Tails, Knuckles... and Scar. Scar was her boyfriend on Mobius. She missed him deeply. And her best friend Ben as well.

Conan came home a half hour later than Rebecca did. When he entered his room, he found Rebecca gone. Now Rebecca, with alot of curiosity went to Jimmy's house. She hid there, and while she was there she managed to read some Holmes books too. She was very mad at Amy for being such a brat. "Who is she to always be in my face? Maybe... Maybe I really don't belong here on Earth." She said depressed.


Yes... Like all other times I say: I will write more later.

P.S. Your avatar is SO adorable Shakura!

This post has been edited by Rebecca Hedgehog: Feb 2 2006, 09:17 PM

[NotSoFluent]

[Hee, thanks. Yours is cute, too. <3]

For some reason Ayumi/Amy did something that I thought she was going to do; she's definitely in-character with this story.

Though I can't help but ponder upon this, but Ayumi acts just like Amy Rose in that part and the character herself happens to be dubbed with the same name. Hah, irony.